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Post by Rachel Logan on May 13, 2006 14:40:25 GMT -5
This is where I have the character bios for the Ardenia Tavern.
PLEASE RATE AND REVIEW!
Index: Post 1- this Post 2- Rachel Takuro Post 3- Adrian and Azara Post 4- Maelstrom
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 13, 2006 14:40:41 GMT -5
Name: Rachel Takuro
Alias (fake name): Raen Moss (Raen pronounced "Ray-en")
Association: Adventurer
Race: Ridish Elf/Demon
Age: 13 5/6
Gender: Female
Appearance: Body: short, strong, light (pale) skin, green triangles (on back of hands, feet, and middle of chest) Eyes: brown, make you feel watched if stared into too long Hair: dark brown, down to shoulders, parts at forehead Clothes: green tunic, dark blue half-cloak, brown boots with straps, brown gloves with finger holes and metal plate, under mail, dark white pants, fighting goggles, belt
Skills: Can control the elements (Wind, Earth, Fire, Water, Light, Dark), adept in magic from Maelstrom, good with a sword and ninja weapons, an extremely fast runner, very swift and a good jumper, strong, extraordinarily smart
Weapons: Flash Blade- long sword, golden hilt, red leather handle, Summoning Sapphire, unleashes Lightning Strike, blue scabbard with golden trimming Shuriken- ninja throwing star Kunai- ninja knife Magic Bo Staff- fighting staff, size-changing charm
Companions: Taku (pet)- forest Athakan dragon, male, appears 12 years old, green scales, brown eyes, nose horn, 2 forehead horns, spikes along top of neck and tail, 13 ft long, 5 ft wide, 14 ft foot wingspan, 210 lbs. Bobo (pet)- dragal (mammal-dragon), male, 5 years old, orange fur, blue eyes, nose horn, 11" long, 3" wide, 8" wingspan, 2 lbs. Hikagi- her friend and traveling companion (they share an unintentional bond)
Other: Rachel has many different emotions and a varied personality. She can control the elements and is 75% vegetarian. Bobo the Dragal and Taku the Dragon accompany her on her journeys to far places, and she has been through many battles with them. Her home is in Athaka, a distant land that her family ruled upon. However, she was captured when she was a young child in a battle. Her brother Sokenak died in the battle when she was taken. Erin Takuro was the last child of royalty that remained in the kingdom. The slavers who took Rachel cast a spell upon her that made her past cloudy. Rachel was saved by a small army of Ridish warriors when they past through a dark forest. She lived in Ridian Forest for most of her childhood, oblivious to the fact that she was royal. When she became older she left on an adventure to save the forest, but she did not return even though she succeeded. She was lost at sea in her travels on the Sea Blazer. A while later, a powerful elder named Katamaru found her washed up on the shore of the Southern Continent. He brought her to an academic camp. Rachel was kept at a camp for several years being cared for by Sensei Katamaru, who taught her lessons about fighting and life-provisions, such as math, sciences, history, and the arts. After she heard of a war, she went on a journey with her friends and participated in it. Then she obtained the Flash Blade and learned how to use it skillfully. Rachel returned to Athaka and back to Ridian Forest, where the inhabitants listened to her stories in awe. Even though she is young, she has seen many things that most elders have not. She left again to find her parents, which was then that she learned about her family. Her father was killed in the battle for peace among the Continents, but her mother still lived. Once she found her mother at her castle, she stayed there for a few months, but she could not be happy if remaining idle. She returned to accompany her friends on more adventures and took prominent parts in battles. Her reputation as a warrior and peacemaker grew, but things began to become eerie. Rachel knew before that her body was holding a demon, yet she did not know it was an evil spirit named Maelstrom. He was once a solid being, feared by all. He was a gigantic three-tailed, four-eyed, human-like wolf that caused destruction upon the whole world. Maelstrom nearly caused the Demonic Empire, which became an important part of history and is taught to all apprentices and children. He sealed the Gods into a dark void, which could not be penetrated. But an elder named Hakonen, Master of the Elements, battled the monster and confined him into his body. When Master Hakonen died, his spirit passed into another body, and to another, and so forth. Maelstrom's spirit followed, in the grip of the Elemental Spirit, and finally landed into a girl's body, which became Rachel. Rachel was very uneasy and disturbed about this, so she had to try to not unleash Maelstrom's wrath upon the world.
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 13:14:54 GMT -5
Name: Adrian Takuro (or last name of father)
Association: Adventurer
Race: Human/Ridish Elf/Demon
Age: 13 (not really born yet)
Gender: Male
Appearance: Body: Light skin, muscular, young looking, has sharp canine teeth (the two bottom ones stick out), looks human Eyes: Green Hair: Dark brown, short cowlick Clothes: Baggy black pants, dark brown leather boots with straps, bandage on his right upper arm
Skills: Hand-to-hand combat, evasion, flying, strength
Weapons: Claws, teeth, and other physical weapons such as strength
Companions: None yet
Other: Adrian is the son of Rachel Takuro and received her powers of Maelstrom and his father's strength. He has another form with bat-like wings, three dark wolf tails (in his most powerful form), four red eyes (in his most powerful form), claws, and extremely sharp teeth.
Name: Azara Takuro (or last name of father)
Association: Adventurer
Race: Ridish Elf/Human
Age: 14 (not really born yet)
Gender: Female
Appearance: Body: Light (slightly tanned) skin, flexible, has pointed ears Eyes: Green Hair: Blonde, down to just above waist, bangs that go to eyebrows and go lower along the sides of the face (not in eyes) Clothes: Long yellow sleeveless tunic, red sash, tight dark red boots, dark red vambraces, thin white silky long-sleeved magic under armor
Skills: Great at evasion (much better than Adrian), extremely good at controlling fire, second best is wind, expert at healing
Weapons: Fire
Companions: None yet
Other: Azara is the first daughter of Rachel. She inherited the ability of controlling her two elements from her mother. She exceeds at healing and is very flexible, making her faster and better at dodging attacks than her younger brother.
^^^These bios aren't exactly finished, but rate them anyway.^^^
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 13:15:09 GMT -5
Name: Maelstrom
Association: Evil Tyrant/Spirit
Race: Demon/Deity
Age: Younger than the Gods (Fretar, Mazak, and Terace), older than the races
Gender: Male
Appearance: Body (in demon form)- huge (can be taller than a mile high), muscular, dark fur, large claws and fangs, three wolf tails, looks much like a demonic werewolf with black fur, has a mane that goes along head to back Body (in human form)- tall, muscular, slightly tanned skin Eyes- four red eyes, glow with fire, has normal red eyes when in human form Hair (in human form)- pure black, covers sides of faces, low tress in back of hair held by a gold ring Clothes (in human form; often wears this)- short red robes with gold lining, loose white sash around waist, leather shoes, gold vambraces on wrists
Skills: Expert at dark and fire elements, can manipulate people and all living things, is extremely strong and can change reality
Weapons: Claws, fangs, magic, strength, dark and fire elements, manipulating powers
Companions: None, but has thousands of minions
Other: Maelstrom was created by Fretar, Mazak, and Terace as a way to keep balance between good and evil in the future, but his name was Equilor during that time. This was long before humans, elves, or any other race existed. When animals and the races were born, Equilor did his job well, but it would often get out of hand. All went wrong when a younger deity much like Equilor was made as his brother. This new balancer, Equinar was to advise Equilor and become a helper, but Equilor thought that the three Gods favored Equinar more than himself. One day as Equinar was keeping a battle from happening, Equilor took a demonic axe made by Terace and severed his brother's head off. After doing so, Fretar found the body in one of his alters and punished Equilor by sending him down to the depths of Hell. Terace discovered Equilor hundreds of years later and taught him fighting techniques and magic. Once Equilor was promised to become one of the Gods by Terace and had learned everything he wanted, he was brought back up to the overworld. He wrecked havoc on many cities, ruined and destroyed many lives, and wiped out disorganized nations to become ruler. Fretar and Mazak were very hateful toward him, and soon he had renamed himself Maelstrom. He was able to turn into a human, which he would use to gain respect to get followers. Maelstrom created a brotherhood of mages that would help him take over the world in what was called the Demonic Empire. What Maelstrom did not know was that the Master of the Elements had been after him for a long time. Master Hakonen, who was the Master of the Elements during the time of the second attempt at the Demonic Empire, won a long and bloody battle with the demon. He trapped Maelstrom in the spirit of the Master of Elements, which would be passed down to a different person each time the previous Master died. Maelstrom was not seen for many years, but his followers were planning for his rise for hundreds of years. Mazak would always watch the carrier of the demon to make sure all was well. When the two spirits landed in a female Ridish Elf named Rachel Takuro, the baby was not known to be the Master of the Elements until she was much older. That gave Maelstrom enough time to plan his revenge without having any distractions. Luckily, the Demonic Empire was avoided, but when Rachel turned seventeen it was inevitable. Maelstrom's mages captured her and her friends, and he was able to manipulate some of them into becoming evil. After Maelstrom was freed, Hikagi and Rachel became king and queen of the Demonic Empire to serve under him, and less than a year later she had two cruel "twin" children, Adrian and Azara. Maelstrom's mages quadrupled the quickness of the two children's aging, making them both sixteen four years later, and then they would take the spell off. But before they reached the age of five, the Master of the Element's friends became good again and dismantled the empire. Once done, Mazak and Fretar rewound time to before Maelstrom was unleashed, and only Hikagi, Rachel, Idrial, and a few other selected people could remember what had happened. Ever since that had happened, Maelstrom and his followers had been trying to find a way to bring him back. They thought that the world would be much better under the rule of the Demonic Empire. Now they do everything, even commit suicide, to unleash the demon.
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 13:15:28 GMT -5
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 13:18:57 GMT -5
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 13:59:31 GMT -5
I've got a new bio.
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Post by Ired Grethor on May 28, 2006 15:48:12 GMT -5
I'd give it a 6, it was good, but not that good, not enough information.
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 15:49:11 GMT -5
Health? It's not finished. What would you give Rachel's bio?
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Post by Ired Grethor on May 28, 2006 15:51:29 GMT -5
Woops, I don't know why I siad that, I was just playing a game that I lost a lo of health in, I mean history, and backround, and Rachels I would give it a 9, one of the best I've seen.
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