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Post by Rachel Logan on May 28, 2006 17:06:51 GMT -5
I give Hikagi a, hm, 8.4. Good history.
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Post by Hikagi on May 28, 2006 18:42:39 GMT -5
Thanks, You do know that that is only like half of the history for him? In my written copy its a bit more detailed...but I made it shorter to go on here.
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Post by Jim Athenos on May 28, 2006 19:57:33 GMT -5
Good, just alot of spelling errors, though I stink at spelling.
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Post by Hikagi on May 29, 2006 8:55:55 GMT -5
Yeah I kinda rushed it when I typed it.
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Post by Jim Athenos on May 29, 2006 8:58:18 GMT -5
I know how you feel.
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Post by Hikagi on May 29, 2006 9:31:21 GMT -5
I've revised my Bio a little bit and added some things in the history and skills sections. Forgot some stuff... -.-
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Post by Rachel Logan on May 29, 2006 12:36:07 GMT -5
My bios for the kids aren't perfect too. I haven't finished them...
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Post by Hikagi on May 30, 2006 17:31:45 GMT -5
In the next few days or even tonight I might get my Zakar Bio up...dunno though..
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Post by Hikagi on May 30, 2006 18:37:55 GMT -5
Name: Zakar Xalorak (Za-lor-ack) Age: 16 Association: Leader of a small band of thieves. Race: Human Gender: Male
Appearance: Black leather vest, two sword sheaths on thighs, Black boots, black pants, Long red markings on both arms (assist magic), a dark blue shirt under the vest with many places for other gear. Blue eyes with a scar on forhead (Due to failed spell). Spiked black hair with small ponytail in back. (To keep hair together in back so dark flames cannot lit it aflame)
Weapons: Two Katanas, and one retractable knife blade ( Comes out of glove) on left arm.
Skills: Able to manipulate objects and control them. Efficient with dark magic and is very quick. Moves over ANY terrain with ease and can use almost any part of the envirment to his advantage.
History: Born in the city of Kayaran, Zakar grew up in the shadows of his brother, Richard (20 Years of age at Zakar's birth). He wished that somday he could be like him, for he was a skillful swordsman, and respected by many. By the time Zakar was 12, Richard had been involved with the goverment politicly, and now governed a section of the city. During this time Richard barely had the time to see his family, and Zakar grew impateint.
His parents barely had enough money to support themselves and Zakar had been living on the streets to obtain money himself. On the streets, he now stole for a living and eventually founded a group of bandits. Richard was now aware of Zakar's actions but was hesitant to order authorities to capture him. Zakar then sparked the local authority's temper with an organized assualt on a guard outpost in the west side of the city. Zakar hoped this would distract others close by so he could raid an ambassador's estate. But things did not go how he hoped. Special forces were sent to capture him and while running through an empty street, his parents noticed him and pleaded for him to turn himself in. Zakar slayed the both of them and was later captured. Zakar was then put on trial for his actions. While on trial, his fellow bandits had escaped the city. Zakar was then exiled from Kayaran and forced to live in the Gararian mountain range.
He found a ruined village that seemed to be burned down. Charred skeletons flooded the rubble covered pathways and seemed to have been this way for many years. While scavaging on one of the mountaintops one morning, he found a magician named Xarin who had just accomplished bringing Hikagi back to life. Zakar was interested with the magician's great knowledge and was soon an apprentice to him. Hikagi and Zakar were great rivals during their intense training sessions, and both grew in skill rapidly. Xarin was amazed by their great skill but later died of old age. After this, Hikagi ventured off on his own but Zakar stayed at the hut and soon found books on dark magic. Having already gone partly insane, he studied and learned many dark spells. After acheiving knowledge of this magic, he set out and met up with his former underlings. Zakar now raided homes once more across the countryside. After a month, Zakar had heard news that a Kayaran leader was murdered. He knew surely that it was his brother and later was informed of the description of the murderer, Via one of his bandits who had gone back to the city. The decription fit Hikagi perfectly, and Zakar became consumed with rage. He set out with his group of bandits to find and assasinate Hikagi, His former classmate.
** STILL MUCH TO BE REVEALED**
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Post by Hikagi on May 30, 2006 18:38:19 GMT -5
As with Hikagi, this is not the full bio. That and i left out a few details....My hand hurts..
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